Score: 0

"Let me explain something:"

submission: ~|Ultros Crashes the Opera|~

date: August 15, 2006

Step 1; Open FLStudio 5/6.
Step 2; Download midi file, insert into FL.
Step 3; With no effort, use one of your illigally downloaded plugins such as Edirol or Garritan.
Soon to be East West.
Step 4; Replace instruments.
Step 5; Add tempo changes
Step 6; Submit.

This is the recipy to become the most pathedic scum at newgrounds.
I only like your one last song you did with your keyboard, even though it was off-tempo and everything. Because there actually was some feckin effort.

And don't give me that "bought" bullshit.
You couldn't make music for shit until SmartPoetic told you how to midi-rip.
and NOONE would buy those VSTi's when they're that damn new to the whole composing thing.

Score: 10

"You stole my ascii."

submission: §Arbiter§ MAC6 - TANKMEN Theme

date: August 14, 2006

Bastard.
Anyways, beautifully created my friend, I enjoy these kind of tracks, and I'm glad you begun submitting to NG.

The oboe lead could have been better, but I'm a sucker for the last part.
Anyways, Great song, keep it up.

-Zeth

Score: 10

"Rock on!"

submission: The Night Stalks You

date: August 10, 2006

You made my brain die by making such awesome tunes ! >:(
Let's hold hands and call satan over for pizza ! >:(
Or not, ok.
This song was really great productionwise and great job with the guitar.
The score is...because I'm bored. (You know I love you) Continue rocking !

Score: 10

"Nice Rearrangement"

submission: FFX Battle (Orchestra)

date: August 10, 2006

You have some decent samples, I take it it's soundfonts? if not---tell me what you use.
Your friend---Zeth :D

Score: 10

"This one made me laugh."

submission: Ninjaz Theme

date: August 10, 2006

One of the fewer tracks with actual vocals at this webpage. Sound's really great :)
5/5 and much hugs >:(

Score: 10

"Great song."

submission: AoE Overture (Bezo)

date: August 10, 2006

Was a beautiful song, And I've been anticipating and hoping for some more stuff from you.
(Long Time-Listener).
So I hope my 5 will do you some good :)

Score: 7

"DavidOrr - Orr (ST) Love"

submission: -Orr-(ST) Love

date: July 14, 2006

I liked your piano chord structure; harmonic.
After a while; there came some half-muted pizzicato strings; volume up on them next time.
The flute probably would have been better an octave down; but good nethertheless; Your piano was actually quite simplistic; but still works.
I hear that you play the keyboard Maestro/Orr (Which one do you go by?)

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I think you could have added percussionate works; shakereggs; bongo's; timpani's.
All would have worked; believe it or not.
Not your strongest piece; but it gain's a seven; and a five to boost your scores a bit.

Best of wishes; Christian S. (Arbiter)
Ps; I'd love you to swing by my page and review my songs; more will be added to my section later.

Score: 8

"Nice."

submission: DERANGED (Better Quality)

date: June 15, 2006

Ok, BMI---
That was some smooth guitar playing and I'm rather impressed.
The drums was simple, but worked throughout the song just fine.
I'm impressed of your vocal skills---not that many that can actually sing at this website.
However--If you messed up somewhere, I'll say the same to you as with MaestroSorrow.
It was with the equalizing.
I feel that this track should have more bass on that el-guitar.
So it don't sound that thin.

Anyhow--Check out my music if you find the time.
pretty much the same genre as MaestroSorrow does.

Score: 7

"Ok; My first review in ages."

submission: _-=[United Front]=-_

date: June 15, 2006

And only because it's you.

Ok---In the beginning I felt it was lacking depth. And once again.
I feel that your percussion is good.
But overpower too much.
You have great melodic lines going, however;
You once again have not put enough emphasis on the contrabass (if there even is one).
So the track seems too thin throughout the whole thing.

You had alot action in this piece, which I liked.
And great use of the bells.
The choir sounded rather fake---but unless you feel like spending thousands of dollars---I can see why. So dont worry there.

Your clarity is rather bad, due to no equalizing.
Making this track sound rather washed out (Like my previous tracks, before I mastered equalizing.)

You're a great composer Sorrow---But there are still errors that need correction.
I'll admit that I've lost alot of my own melodic feel, but you still have yours.

The way I see it in this track--You had alot great idea's, just not executed well enough.

-Sorry for being harsh, and I hope you'll forgive me :P

-Christian Sandviknes

Score: 8

"Brilliant for your first."

submission: Flowing Darkness

date: April 14, 2006

If this is your first work ever, then you show great promise.
You still have some difficulties putting stuff together, but you had some nice arpeggio's going on, and the melodylines were fairly good.
I'm impressed merely because this is your first work.
Now, You need to smoothen out some of your melodylines, and equalize your song a bit better.
I think you made this in FL because of the effects, and the drums.
And it appears that the drums died out later on in the song, making it hard to follow the rhythm.
I suggest you make some different drum patterns that you combine with the melodies.

If you find the time, check out some of my melodies.