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Ok, The guitar was excellent, far better than the average, it seemed quite planned.
However, It seemed quite random and non stabile. I think even though its your first you should make a solid riff that goes through much of the song. and the second and light guitar could have been better fit.
I am a fan of metal, And this was no exception of metal's good music :D
Good luck with yer music.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review I love hearing feedback.Yeah your right when I made this I was so amped about finally writing my own music that I ended up cramming a bunch of ideas together.The solo was just a filler because without one it sounded empty.My newest one is much better as far as stability.Thanks a lot for the review I appreciate it.
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Overall its a nice guitar, But why did you put it in Miscellaneous? It's pretty obvious a Heavy Metal track, and you should get some new recording stuff, because it had poor quality.
And dont just hate me for giving you a 7, but i find that pretty nice of me considering it was so damn poor quality, Its good for a first submission though.
Good luck with music man.
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First of all, Your song was at ny point any advanced, and it was boring after a while, but it also had a nice theme. It wasnt too big so i could live with it.
You say you have to use recording for everything, What program do you use for doing so?
Anyways, I suggest you keep going with your music, as long as you have the motivation, you will recive more of the skills.
-Review by Zellion/Zeth-
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I'm always dissatisfied how songs I make turns out on the computer, I should considering buying something real.
Currently I'm using something weird called "iPiano" to make the music. http://home.chello.no/~progress/ipiano.jpg
Thanks for the motiviation, I'll keep praticing :)
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I like metal. alot. Really really much.
You scored a bit at that, if im not too wrong you used "slayer" for fruityloops at the guitar and some standard sounds for drums.
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It was really repetive, and cliche.
and god damn annoying. but hey, i've heard stuff ten times as bad as this.
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I must say that this wasnt the worst i've heard,nor the best. But it show some promise.
But the thing that i really didnt understand is how you can see this as a dark forest,or a lost forest for that matter. It was all techno-dance and i really cant see a lost forest that way,I see a über-techno forest when i hear this.
-Zellion-
Author's Response:
Did i ever mention forest in this?lol, i think "lost in shadows" fits in decently, thats what i thought of when i listned to it anyways ... Thanks for your review!
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Well,You wanted a review and here it is.
I think that it was pretty cool for being a loop.
It REALLY needs some improvement at the clarity because it was hard to hear it properly.
Im new to music myself so i shouldnt go hard at anyone in the beginning. So keep up the good work and i would like to hear more from you,Then ill review more of your music.
-Zellion-
Author's Response:
Thanks for the much awaited review! I shall review your couple of audios in return. :) It was a some time since i made this and i see tons of mistakes in it too, lol. :)
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